Current Traditional

If I were to correct the whaling paper adhering to the Current Traditional theory, I would address the following issues:

- There should be paragraphs to separate the main ideas. This will also make it easier to read.

- Double spacing would make it easier to read and make it easier for the teacher to write comments.

- Eliminate "you" so that it is not so informal.

- A quarter of the way down the page, use commas instead of semicolons for the following sentence: "These measures provide for the protection of certain species, designate..."

- Parenthetical documentation should adhere to MLA or APA.

- Include a Works Cited page.

- Make sure you have reached the assigned page limit.